Monday, 15 October 2012

Mrs D

The storyboard is a good first draft Ellie. You need to go back to the lyrics - you have put in your blog that it is about unconditional love and feeling alone - you haven't reflected this in your storyboard. It is very 'safe' and there is no camera movement. Check the mark scheme and go back to RMAs for help.

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  1. Ok miss, I will edit my story board today as I have gone over the lyrics and looked again at similar RMA's. I will also do a 2nd draft of my moving image today then plan for my first filming session.

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